Sample Papers

Paper #1
"Foreign Athletic Limits"
Grade: D
Explanation:
This paper has many spelling errors and the paper doesn't have a good opening. The paper also doesn't have a conclusion or a paragraph that summarizes what has been said. Overall the paper isn't written very well.

Paper#2
"Online College vs. Online High School"
Grade: C
Explanation:
This paper has spelling errors and it was very hard to read because of the many errors. I could see the point but the way the paper is written threw it off. The essay also has some baby sentences. That is why i would give this reader a C.


Paper#3
"Predisposed to Divorce"
Grade: A
Explanation:
The way the writer starts this essay captures me. The paper has clear sentences so that I can understand her point clearly. This paper doesn't have any grammical errors or mispellings. Thats why I feel that this paper deserves and A.


Paper#4
"NAACP Case Against Gun Manufactures"
Grade:A
Explanation:
The writer used the wrong spellings for some words and had some punctuation errors. The paper was written very well and she stated her point clearly. I understood what the writer was explaining. Overall the paper was very good.