Tuesday, December 1, 2009
Blog # 13
The most important thing that I learned in English 101 was to revise and edit my papers. I also learned to have numerous people check over and revise my work before I summit the papers. I also learned to take more time preparing my outlines and brainstorming new ideas before starting on my rough drafts. I realized that I run out time numerously when writing my papers. Sometimes I start late and end up rushing to finish my papers. In this class my writing is a little bit different. In my other classes I write research papers and I get to choose any topics. My writing process hasn't change. The style is the same, the only thing with this class is that my papers are a lot longer.
Wednesday, November 4, 2009
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Blog #9
Research Questions
1. Are scholarships easy to get?
2. What are the different kinds of scholarships?
3. Is the FAFSA a good way to determine whether how much mony students need for college.
4. Are there many scholarships available for avarage or "C" students?
Search Terms
1. Financial aid
2. Student Loans
3.Grants
4.Scholarships
1. Are scholarships easy to get?
2. What are the different kinds of scholarships?
3. Is the FAFSA a good way to determine whether how much mony students need for college.
4. Are there many scholarships available for avarage or "C" students?
Search Terms
1. Financial aid
2. Student Loans
3.Grants
4.Scholarships
Monday, October 19, 2009
Blog #8
Should on-campus drivers have to walk to class before 2:00?
On-Campus drives should be able to drive to class before 2:00. We should be able to drive on the days that it rains or when the weather is bad. It's not fair to the students when they have to walk in the rain and get sick.
On-Campus drives should be able to drive to class before 2:00. We should be able to drive on the days that it rains or when the weather is bad. It's not fair to the students when they have to walk in the rain and get sick.
Monday, September 28, 2009
Sample Papers
Paper #1
"Foreign Athletic Limits"
Grade: D
Explanation:
This paper has many spelling errors and the paper doesn't have a good opening. The paper also doesn't have a conclusion or a paragraph that summarizes what has been said. Overall the paper isn't written very well.
Paper#2
"Online College vs. Online High School"
Grade: C
Explanation:
This paper has spelling errors and it was very hard to read because of the many errors. I could see the point but the way the paper is written threw it off. The essay also has some baby sentences. That is why i would give this reader a C.
Paper#3
"Predisposed to Divorce"
Grade: A
Explanation:
The way the writer starts this essay captures me. The paper has clear sentences so that I can understand her point clearly. This paper doesn't have any grammical errors or mispellings. Thats why I feel that this paper deserves and A.
Paper#4
"NAACP Case Against Gun Manufactures"
Grade:A
Explanation:
The writer used the wrong spellings for some words and had some punctuation errors. The paper was written very well and she stated her point clearly. I understood what the writer was explaining. Overall the paper was very good.
"Foreign Athletic Limits"
Grade: D
Explanation:
This paper has many spelling errors and the paper doesn't have a good opening. The paper also doesn't have a conclusion or a paragraph that summarizes what has been said. Overall the paper isn't written very well.
Paper#2
"Online College vs. Online High School"
Grade: C
Explanation:
This paper has spelling errors and it was very hard to read because of the many errors. I could see the point but the way the paper is written threw it off. The essay also has some baby sentences. That is why i would give this reader a C.
Paper#3
"Predisposed to Divorce"
Grade: A
Explanation:
The way the writer starts this essay captures me. The paper has clear sentences so that I can understand her point clearly. This paper doesn't have any grammical errors or mispellings. Thats why I feel that this paper deserves and A.
Paper#4
"NAACP Case Against Gun Manufactures"
Grade:A
Explanation:
The writer used the wrong spellings for some words and had some punctuation errors. The paper was written very well and she stated her point clearly. I understood what the writer was explaining. Overall the paper was very good.
Monday, September 21, 2009
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
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